ext_331272 ([identity profile] thru-her-lens.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] maleghasty 2008-07-02 01:19 am (UTC)

It seemed clear to me too, but the last paragraph seems awkward, somehow. Not sure how to explain it though, so will re-read tomorrow and see if it's clearer then.

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